Should I put in a comma, leave one out?
Does anyone, will anyone, know what its about?
Should I move a word, remove a word or change a word?
Will it sound well when its heard?
Poems, my grandfather said, are meant to be spoken.
He wasn’t joking.
Although of course he did.
When I was a kid.
The hardest part is the last line.
When you get that one right, everything is fine.
10th September, 2016